After creating the first drafts of my trailer, poster and magazine, I was given feedback on what I could improve:
-Trailer:
- Add in establishing shots of people walking around in the beginning of the trailer, to show the equilibrium more evidently.
- Add in faster/action packed shots towards the end of the trailer.This will help to keep in with conventions.
- Quieten the non-diegetic sound (music) so that the dialogue can be heard clearer.
- Add in some cinematic sound effects, to certain moments in the trailer. (Like a cinematic boom effect)
-Poster
- Manipulate the face of the protagonist a bit more to see if it will make a more convincing poster. 'Zombifying' the face might help show the genre more clearly too.
- Change the colour of the font to the phrase in the tagline 'One deadly virus.' To express its significance and importance in relation to the film itself.
-Magazine
- Change some of the fonts used, so that it relates more to the genre of magazine. Make sure fonts used make up a font family.
- Alter the skyline so that it stands out more at the top and is more interesting to the eye of the audience.
